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“The Secret Life of Pets” meets “Star Trek”. An geeky, adventurous young tortoise and her all animal crew blast off from NASA to save the galaxy in this animated musical television series. A YA anime series (12+)
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Tina, a brainy and brave impulsive twelve year old tortoise, eagerly trains at NASA’s renewed critters-in-space program in pursuit of her dream of going into space. When she befriends and tries to help the new “recruit”, the negative and nervous logical Alan, a monkey, he is launched into space mysteriously disappearing into a worm hole! But Tina forms her own Critters crew and they set off in their own starship cruiser to save him. Can Tina as our fearless captain find her best friend, keep her seemly inept wild critters crew safe as they visit new worlds, and maybe even reach the prophesied Ancients to save the entire universe?
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Hi, Crystal! Sounds really cute. But your logline is more of a summary than a logline. A logline does not include the title or any proper names. Also, delete the episode time. Finally, it must set forth the goal of the protagonist WITH the obstacles she faces. Good luck with it!
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