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FEROCITY THE SNOWMAN
By FV Everleigh
A dastardly man give some adorable children a gift with dire consequences.
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Hi FV, I'd recommend adding some more detail to the logline. It's hard to picture what your story is about when it's so vague. Maybe add what the gift is, or what the man's motivation is to give it.
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