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THRELLFALL
By Gabrielle Nehring
When treachery threatens her lowland farm’s survival, a stouthearted firstborn volunteers for the Threllfall, an ascension lottery to the perilous Kingdom of Rhaegal, leaving behind her family and one true love.
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If you can get it to between 25-29 words it will be awesome in addition I have no idea what the logline is really about as to what is Threllfall and best not to use the title in the logline and what is a highborne world.
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