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Two Time travelers try to unravel what caused the destruction of Saint Louis, and how to prevent it from happening to other cities.
SYNOPSIS:
A nerdy scientist, GEORGE O CONNOR, is clearly captured by ANDI DALY. They both arrive from the future in a city that is completely destroyed. That city turns out to be SAINT LOUIS.
Andi is controlling George with her Voodoo doll and gets him to tell the story of how this all happened. He confirms to her that it starts in 3023 in a floating school. In this School, BILL O CONNOR is making a rogue weapon/creation that can finally defeat the ADMINISTRATION. He sends the creation/weapon to the past.
Bill is surrounded by the Admin police to give the location of the weapon. He refuses and is killed in the process.
It turns out the weapon is CHRISTOPHER THOMAS, and he was sent to a 2023 Saint Louis, where people’s life is all about work. He is able to control people with his words. But there are side effects. The first being is that the person that the powers are used on would open up their inner thoughts. The person would spill their secrets.
The other side effect is that the person would get superhuman strength for a short period of time. Yet this would be temporary and the person wouldn’t remember after a period of time.
Another of Bill’s creations KATE O CONNOR arrives in 2023 Saint Louis to take Christopher back to the future. She has the ability to FREEZE TIME. The side effect is that people would get aggressive with one another.
Christopher does not want to go. Kate and Christopher fight, creating an energy ball and destroying their only way home.
George finishes his story. Andi puts him to sleep. She and the Admin Police need to stop Christopher and Kate from getting home and becoming more powerful.
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