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When a man finds himself mysteriously transplanted into a sealed cage, he yearns to uncover the truth behind his new reality and the gigantic world outside.
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After a man falls unconscious, he mysteriously awakens within an enclosed cage along with dozens of other captives. Even though the dismal people have lost their memory, common knowledge, and speech capabilities, they speculate on the reality of their captivity and what is beyond the cage.
When the man manages to get a glimpse of the outside world and is hailed as a prophet among the cage-dwellers, it incites religious fervor and violent mob reprisal. But when their cage suddenly empties out atop of a processing conveyor belt, they find themselves all lead to be minced into ground-meat. Along with few others, the man miraculously survives and leads the escapees out of the slaughter-house into a gigantic new world.
There, they soon discover that not only are they are not alone, but the purpose of their existence is their new place at the bottom of the food-chain. ©
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"But when their cage suddenly empties out atop of a processing conveyor belt, they find themselves all lead to be minced into ground-meat. Along with few others, the man miraculously survives and leads the escapees out of the slaughter-house into a gigantic new world."
Personally, I think this dumbs down your story to a cliché gore horror flick. Focus more on the dilemma between your protagonists. Flesh them out. Still though, the premise can attract a lot of viewers if your themes are told in a concise manner. As long as you avoid the horror tropes, there is potential here.
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