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A cautious prince needs to get married, so traditionally the 18 nights ball is announced.
With her mother laying on her deathbed an adventurous girl uses this opportunity to search the castle for the fairy of life so she can save her. Now she must decide to either stay and face her feelings or save her mother.
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Hey Anesa, thanks for posting! I think you mean "princess" rather than "prince". It seems like a really fun journey!
Hey Jason, thanks soo much for connecting. I did mean prince but with the way, the logline is structured I understand why it's confusing. I will restructure the logline and repost the updated version. Thank you so much again for the comment I now know how to make it better.
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Thank you so much for the rating, Alpha. It means a lot
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