THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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TECH PLANET
By Anesa "MS" Hasani
When a group of people are stealing important pieces of technology the world starts to breakdown. While the people in charge try to mask what is happening an ambitious girl and an intelligent boy are going against everything they were taught to save the planet while putting their lives on the line.
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Sounds like a big adventure Anesa. I think you can start this logline with "When a group of people are stealing important pieces of technology..." so that you set up the circumstances there.
I Will do that Jason. Loglines are not one of my strong points, every comment helps me get better so thank you a lot.