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RESILIENCE
By Ravi Edara

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

A young woman fights for true self when her competence is always oppressed.

SYNOPSIS:

Story: Resilience is a story of a young woman,who has lost her courage and confidence gradually due to different and subtle circumstances she faces in her daily life. But with constant fight in her head to lead her life in her own way and with the inconspicuous guidance from her cousin, she reinvents her true-self.

Synopsis:

Molly Thompson- a low esteem brilliant young woman-amusing herself with crossword puzzle, sitting in a cafe, noticed by a kind hearted server as she comes there regularly, offers her a cupcake, Molly smoothly denies his empathetic feeling by paying for it while leaving.

Molly while walking back unknowingly starts limping, her heart racing fast as soon as she starts reaching home, enters the home, searches for an offer letter she is anticipating from a bunch of other letters at the door, disappointed as she didnt find any, starts walking in, finds her boy friend Mike on the sofa in the hall.

Mike, always prioritise himself than her, wants to settle in Spain, always makes her feel stupid around him, eventually suffered her confidence and makes her feel she's a dummy. She crosses him in the hallway listening his scathing remarks about her with his friend on a phone.

She immediately goes to her room, locks the door, closes her ears to his withering criticism.

Molly finds out the other day that she did received the offer letter, but doesn't have courage to let her boyfriend know about that, goes to a cafe to meet his cousin Gareth, practically grew up together to pick up few things belongs to her.

Gareth observes her limp while walking into the cafe, also quickly comes to know about the offer, make her realise that the situation she is into is like now or never and helps her to regain her courage which she had abundantly while at her teens. He also ascertain the fact that she has no physical problem of limping and she does it unknowingly when she is in extreme stress, a physical impression of her mental state.

Molly at home when confronted by Mike about the offer, gathering lots of courage, finally takes a stand of accepting the offer, relieving from all the stress she accumulated over the years, walks back with a smile on her face with no limp forever.

RESILIENCE

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Nathaniel Baker

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Ravi Edara

Thank you Nathaniel for doing it again ... I accidentally deleted the original link ...

Tasha Lewis

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Ravi Edara

Thank you Tasha Lewis for your time ...

Tasha Lewis

Your welcome Ravi Edara.

Angela Cristantello

A lovely start, Ravi! As opposed to saying their name, it's often helpful for our protagonist to be described as a adjective + noun in our loglines because it A) helps us have a clearer understanding right off the bat of whose eyes we're seeing this story through, and therefore B) will ultimately hook us in even quicker. So, for example: "a wheelchair-bound photographer", "a young F.B.I. cadet", "an insomniac office worker and a devil-may-care soap maker", etc.

I hope that this is helpful!

Nate Rymer

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Ravi Edara

Thank you Nate Rymer for your time and feedback. Well appreciated.

Ravi Edara

Thankyou Angela Cristantello for your feedback and time, I tried to make better the logline ... i will keep trying ...

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