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Two dogs, separated by a garden fence and by vastly different life pursuits, are forced by a common tragedy to discover the importance of brotherliness
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In a fantasy town , two dogs try to get a grip on living amiably as next-door neighbors. Having to deal with their differences in social status and the stark contrast of their hopes and aspirations, our canine, odd couple try to discourse a way to mutual respect.One is a pampered prize bulldog, obsessed with his social advantages; the other is a self-effacing mongrel with a hard owner . The sudden death of their
masters brings both to terms with a very bleak future ahead. However, constant hardship has prepared the mongrel for such a situation, while the other considers the future with fear.
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I like the concept, Rotimi Timi Ogunjobi. I would remove the comma behind fence. The logline needs a period at the end.
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Thank you Maurice