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RED SAND
By Amelie Leclerc
A mother forces her two 8-year-old daughters to duel against each other in order to save up money after the death of their father.
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I like the premise. A sort of "Fight Club" for Kids. Lots of possibilities. I'd like to read the screenplay!!!!
There's so much that I like about this, Amelie! I do, however, feel like we need to clarify what kind of "duel" we're talking about here, as that choice is going to help set and solidify the tone for the logline.
Hi, thank you for your comment! I am referring to a cowboy duel, but I'm not so sure how to phrase that, since it takes place in 1984 and therefore is not a western properly speaking. Maybe "gun duel" would do it? I am always open to suggestions! Thank you.
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