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BLIND WORLD
By Dayna Von Thaer

GENRE: Sci-fi, Adventure
LOGLINE:

A massive solar flare erupts, blinding half of the global population while a team of scientists in the Antarctic who discover the flare, fight to get to their families on the mainland before being trapped on the south pole. 

Tasha Lewis

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Maurice Vaughan

Wow, this sounds exciting, Dayna Von Thaer! I like Sci-Fi movies like this. "The Day After Tomorrow," "The Core," "Greenland," etc.

I think the first part of your logline needs a little work. Not much. Here's two logline suggestions:

"After a massive solar flare erupts and blinds half of the global population, a team of scientists in the Antarctic fights to get to their families on the mainland before being trapped at the south pole."

"After a massive solar flare erupts and blinds half of the world, a team of scientists in the Antarctic fights to get to their families on the mainland before being trapped at the south pole."

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