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In the 1970's Chuck Spencer finally gets his dream job of being a C.I.A. case agent. He assigned to the American Embassy in Pakistan, while there he will construct a spy ring, and gather intelligence on America's enemies.
SYNOPSIS:
Chuck Spencer is a real spy.
He lives in an apartment on the American Embassy grounds
He has to work a cover job and wear his own clothes
His female neighbor Renee does want to sleep with him, but he's to busy watching pro wrestling to notice and worst of all Chuck Spencer has to call his mother.
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Hey Wayne, thanks for sharing! I think we might need a bit more context here. It sounds like you have an inciting incident here but not much else after that. Is there a big drive to the narrative after he gets the dream job?
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The first season is going to be Chuck discovers that the Soviets are planning to invade Afghanistan and his boss doesn't believe him.
I've just learned how to write things like loglines and synopsis and I didn't know how to mention that, without making it too long
Also, sorry it took me so long to respond
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If this is a comedy-thriller, some aspect of comedy should be hinted to in the logline. Good premise, though!
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