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STARSHIPS WERE MEANT TO FLY! :)
By Fahd Aldajani فهد الدعجاني
" A secret agent alien on a secret planet called ( the golden planet ) who trying to save
the earth with his partner & prevent a universal disaster, But they start a new bigger problem to
everyone when they provoke the strongest pirate in the universe "
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Dear Mr.Aldajani,
It could be a good idea to write your logline in the present tense.
A few questions that pop up in my mind:
1. What is the inciting incident?
2. Who is the antagonist?
3. The logline reads like they saved the Universe (including Earth), but started a new problem; what IS this problem, and what could be the possible solution for it?
First thing I would do is 'google' logline structures.
Simply type "How to write a movie logline."
(Great you like art.)
Respectfully yours,
Rutger Oosterhoff
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