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By Jon Payton
A socially inept young man tries his hand at the dating scene with "memorable" results.
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Hi Jon, this definitely has potential, but you should include some more of the story to make it stand out. Perhaps if you reworded it, "After a socially inept young man tries his hand at dating..." and add what some of those "memorable" results are. Great work!
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