Hi Jon, this definitely has potential, but you should include some more of the story to make it stand out. Perhaps if you reworded it, "After a socially inept young man tries his hand at dating..." and add what some of those "memorable" results are. Great work!
Hi Jon, this definitely has potential, but you should include some more of the story to make it stand out. Perhaps if you reworded it, "After a socially inept young man tries his hand at dating..." and add what some of those "memorable" results are. Great work!
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