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BOUNTY SISTERS
By J.D. Elliby
On the hook for their dead father's gambling debts and thirty days from eviction, three badass braid rocking sisters decide to scour lawless star systems as bounty hunters.
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Wow, I'm digging the show concept and artwork, J.D. Elliby! The artwork encapsulates the story.
I really like the logline. I think the only thing that's missing is the inciting incident at the start of the logline (or the end).
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Maurice Vaughan I appreciate the comment. I'll be working through this one over the next several days. Thanks for the suggestion.
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Thanks for the read and rating Nate Rymer
You're welcome, J.D. Elliby. Unique series. I can see this on a major streamer or network.
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Great logline, J.D. Elliby! I gotta see this show!
One tiny suggestion: Change "braid rocking" to "braid-rocking."