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After a holy war wipes out Christianity, Satan rises to claim sovereignty, preaching that life will flourish under his regime, but not before he is challenged by God’s chosen one, who is poised to revolutionise the world for the next thousand years.
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Since the dawn of time, prophecies have intrigued humanity, stirring our imaginations and becoming increasingly unsettling as we draw closer to the next century. However, one was not foretold.
As we approach the end of the first quarter of the new millennium, the world finds itself in the grips of a devastating Holy War. The clash of cultural beliefs fosters animosity, leading humanity to turn against itself, marking the downfall and foreshadowing the end of Christianity.
Cities lie in ruins, rivers are murky black, and the ocean temperature is below freezing. The beauty of the landscape has been lost, and our past has been forgotten forever.
He was the universe's most evil-minded entity, ascending to seize power. Exiled from Heaven, Satan emerges to claim his dominion over the earth and vows to observe the mortal realm.
He takes charge, demonstrating that he would never abandon his children like his predecessor, and life would thrive again for those who choose to follow him, becoming free from the constraints of old religious dogmas.
In contrast, his final chapter was still unfinished. Amidst the growing darkness, a glimmer of hope remained as a light descended from the sky. God’s chosen one, a saviour, was to bring about a new era of peace and enlightenment.
Angel, a figure cloaked in mystery, is destined to revolutionise the world for the next thousand years and, as she stands alone, initiates a mission and challenges Satan, sending him back into his forgotten realm forever.
Angel’s Reign is a captivating dystopian horror tale that explores themes of faith, hope, and the eternal struggle between good and evil through a spellbinding final battle.
With compelling characters, a richly detailed setting, and an epic narrative, it captivates the audience and leaves them pondering the nature of humanity and the divine.
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So the story could be something, but the synopsis spends tons of times describing a standard biblical apocalypse and essentially one line on the actual plot with no details. The logline contains much more information about the story and characters, kinda defeating the need for the synopsis. Given the tone, you're also gonna struggle with suspense or stakes since I think most readers are going to assume Satan will lose at the end, so you need something to convince people to actually read this
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