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In order to revolutionise the world for the next thousand years, Angel, one of the last remaining Christians on Earth, must challenge Satan, poised to claim sovereignty and force him back to hell.
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Angel's Reign chronicles the journey of Angel, a young woman who is burdened by an unimaginable past, as she fights an increasingly fierce battle against the forces of darkness in a world where faith is a flickering light in the shadows. Angel finds comfort in the dilapidated church sanctuary after suffering greatly from a tragic upbringing that included losing her mother, twin sister, and eventually her father. Here, as her destiny intertwines with a sinister prophecy and an ancient, evil force threatening the city, she discovers her true potential purpose.
A string of horrific killings, each with a terrifying symbol, serve as the impetus for this sinister sequence of events: victims with cross-shaped, razor-sharp holes punctured through them, evidence of a force far beyond what is humanly possible. As the killings take place, Angel's quest for meaning and tranquillity turns into a race to discover the identity of the evil force at work. Angel discovers the horrifying truth: the Beast of Hell, a demonic creature, is rising to wreak havoc on the world.
With each battle she faces, Angel must choose whether to succumb to the terror around her or rise as the beacon of hope that can stand against the darkness. Her path is marked by sacrifice, resilience, and a fierce will to protect the innocent. In a climactic confrontation, Angel faces the Beast in a showdown that will test her very soul, as the fate of the city—and perhaps the world—rests on her shoulders. Bishop’s actions threaten to push her to the brink of destruction. His corrupt influence over the forces of darkness reveals a much larger conspiracy that Angel must unravel if she is to stop the Beast and reclaim her destiny.
Angel’s Reign is an epic tale of faith, redemption, and the eternal battle between light and dark. It explores the power of belief, the strength found in the face of despair, and the transformative force of personal sacrifice. In a city teetering on the edge of annihilation, Angel’s faith will be tested like never before, but even in the darkest moments, her courage might be the last hope for humanity.
So the story could be something, but the synopsis spends tons of times describing a standard biblical apocalypse and essentially one line on the actual plot with no details. The logline contains much more information about the story and characters, kinda defeating the need for the synopsis. Given the tone, you're also gonna struggle with suspense or stakes since I think most readers are going to assume Satan will lose at the end, so you need something to convince people to actually read this
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