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THE GODMOTHER
By Linda Summer
An oblivious fairy godmother is mistaken for a hardcore, mafia matriarch and has no choice but to let them all have it with her turbo wand.
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I wouldn't use the word "godmother" twice in one logline.
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Thank you, Brian. Agreed. The mafia godmother will now be the mafia matriarch. In retrospect, I would hope godmothers from all persuasions would refrain from such acts of evil.
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Mafia matriarch... wow, great improvement Linda. Superb... can't ya feel da heat from that simple change? Bravo
Yeah baby! Scary! LOL!! Now I'm doing a crash course in mafia speak. This will be fun.
Lucky that I live with a former special effect designer. He's helping me build a minefield for another short film called Uncle Sven about a sacked, executive stapler, and now has his thinking cap on about my turbo wand and 'let 'em have it' scene requirements. Life doesn't get much better than making stuff up for funny films. Even if nobody watches them...who cares?
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