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LOCKSTEP SHUFFLE
By Linda Summer
Cool cat rock band The MK's schedule a world tour starting in Western Australia but are horrified to learn from a friendly whistle blower messenger service that a 'viral superspreader concert' is being planned by the usual 'Lockstep' tyrants who intend to lock down the whole world down again so they can mint more billionaires as they obliterate the economy. Will the MK's make a public announcement to voice their concerns for the sake of their adoring fans or will they remain silent to keep their place in the fickle fame game?
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Hello Linda. This is a super nice concept, but the logline is a bit too long. Here's a suggestion: 'When a Cool cat rock band schedule a world tour, they learn that a 'viral superspreader concert' is being planned with the purpose of locking down the whole world again, now they have to decide to either voice their concerns or remain silent to keep their place in the fickle fame game.'
Thank you for your feedback, Marcos. That's a much smoother read. I shall keep practising my loglines. Screenplays keep writing themselves here in Australia lately. Spoilt for choice!