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UNDYING LOVE

UNDYING LOVE
By Bill Liggins

GENRE: Sci-fi
LOGLINE:
A lonely podcaster involves herself in a race between the U.S. Government and a dangerous secret society to find an authentic immortal.
Maurice Vaughan

Sounds unique, Bill Liggins! I think your logline could use the inciting incident and stakes. Something like: After/when _____ (inciting incident), a lonely podcaster involves herself in a race between the U.S. Government and a dangerous secret society to find an authentic immortal ______ (stakes).

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