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A love letter to the continent that could have been. The year is 3050 in an uncolonised, futuristic Africa, in one of the most vibrant, successful cities, Lusaaka. Chiko (John Wick meets K-pop) inherits an antique shop, thrusting him and his best friend, Zizi, a disowned princess, into a world lurking with supernatural death gods, Literal beating hearts and at the centre of it all; a secret cult, hell-bent on doing anything necessary to achieve its goals.
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good first try, maybe research what it is and try again - a logline is like a hook! 25 words or less best of luck https://screencraft.org/2020/02/26/the-simple-guide-to-writing-a-logline
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Thank you, Kacee! I'll work on improving it.
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