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While using extreme social interactions to cure his anxiety disorder, a man witnesses an attempted assassination, which he is now forced to complete himself in order to survive the hitman.
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Learning that small social interactions will help him cope with his anxiety disorder, leads Nik to believe that explosive social interactions will cure it all together.
Along this colourful path Nik witnesses the attempted assassination of a stranger. Narrowly escaping, but clearly seen by the hitman, a prudent Nik realises his only chance of survival is to complete the assassination himself, believing the hitman will not come after him if he does.
After an explosive confrontation Nik teams up with the stranger, Ben. They rely on an uneasy alliance to give themselves a chance of surviving the torturous, unstoppable hitman.
They make their last stand on the top floor of a deserted office building, having planted an array of explosives below them, any one of which will create a ‘fucked up domino effect’ running floor to floor if tripped.
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Love the idea that in order to face his fears of not wanting to be social, he has to be extremely social, something I think a lot of people can relate too.
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The concept sounds fun and entertaining, but I'm unclear on some of the logline. Part of the logline says, "a man hurtles toward a brighter future in an entertainingly unsociable way." I think you should lay out his story goal instead of that.
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Thanks Maurice Vaughan :)
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