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TURNING POINT
By Ginger Gilley
Her father muttered his last words, 'he's the devil in flesh...run away...stay away". Forty years later, a turning point stares her in the face - a chance to give the devil his due. The devil who swindled her father's life's work; her family fortune. The devil who beat her, maimed her; obliterated her dancing career. The devil her children call Dad.
TURNING POINT
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I don't have enough information to rate the log line ... what IS the turning point? It's okay to tell. I get that it's about spousal abuse, but what's the hook?
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This is a short synopsis, and even that needs a lot of tweaking.
Hi Ginger: in my younger years, I attended and graduated from Pine Crest Prep and got several script ideas from my days as a boarding student. Loved being in Ft. Lauderdale..especially when you could see the beach from AIA and there was no development beyond 1-75!
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