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The messages are doing a lot of heavy lifting in terms of progressing the narrative.
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Maybe consider updating language Martian to UAP and spacecraft to unknown craft. Also, loglines don't tend to quote characters by name. Good luck!
The messages are doing a lot of heavy lifting in terms of progressing the narrative.
Rated this logline
Maybe consider updating language Martian to UAP and spacecraft to unknown craft. Also, loglines don't tend to quote characters by name. Good luck!