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RAVENOUS
By Reid Pickett
In 1992, Alexander Valley was convicted of killing more than 50 people, maiming 73 victims, and consuming more than a dozen individuals, collectively. Recently, his body was stolen from a secure facility by an unknown assailant. Perhaps connected to the event, one of his three surviving children appears to have gone missing.
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This sounds like an interesting complex story. The logline is a bit bogged down by the amount of people mentioned, I get a bit lost who the story is actually about. Try going back to the basics with a guide to get at the heart of the story. "When [INCITING INCIDENT OCCURS], a [SPECIFIC PROTAGONIST] must [OBJECTIVE], or else [STAKES]."
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