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IS GRANDPA DEAD?
By Mike Wilczynski

GENRE: Drama, Comedy
LOGLINE:

When a spirited grandfather rises from his casket, he must stop his greedy son from selling the family business and heal long-standing family rifts—all before returning to the grave for good.

SYNOPSIS:

When Walt Thompson unexpectedly comes back to life at his own funeral, he uses the opportunity to reconnect with his loved ones, teach his granddaughter Sophie about business, express appreciation to his son Ethan for his caregiving, and expose his other son Derek's selfish plans to sell the family business without sharing the profits. In the end, Walt dies peacefully alongside his beloved wife Maggie, willing half his estate to Sophie and half to Ethan, while leaving Derek with only memories to teach him to be less self-serving.

IS GRANDPA DEAD?

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Maurice Vaughan

Unique concept, Mike Wilczynski! And it sounds like it'd be a fun movie!

I think your logline needs to be tightened up. I suggest focusing on the main storyline in the logline.

When/after a loving grandfather rises from his casket, he fights to/tries to stop his greedy son from selling the family business and keeping all the profits for himself.

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