THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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MEET THE ROACHES
By Ryan Evans
After a family of high-class cockroaches are fumigated out of their Beverly Hills mansion, they try adapting to a new lower-class lifestyle in Los Angeles.
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I wanna see this movie, Ryan Evans! Great poster.
I like the logline, but I think the flow needs a little work. Suggestion: "After a family of high-class cockroaches are fumigated out of their Beverly Hills mansion, they try adapting to a new lower-class lifestyle in Los Angeles."
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Haha, thanks Maurice! I like your logline suggestion. Always a work in progress! I'm hoping to submit to the upcoming stage 32 animation screenplay contest next week! Final deadline fastly approaching, still making revisions on my script!
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You're welcome, Ryan Evans. Yeah, I rewrite my loglines over and over and over. Hope you win the contest and your script gets made! High-class cockroaches. Haha
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