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Vengeful spirit who was raped, brutally murdered, and dismembered haunts the street light in a town controlled by the drug cartel, finds a very reluctant young woman who nearly suffered the same fate as the vengeful spirit to hunt down and kill all the thugs and girlfriends who partook in her cruel demise 15 years earlier.
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A Vengeful spirit who roams the streetlights in an abandoned block in a small town uses a proxy to find all her killers and destroy them lest the spirit is left to haunt the streetlight never satisfying her lust for revenge for eternity. The vengeful spirit must overcome her hatred of people and her unending desire to do harm and keep the proxy alive long enough to get them all.
In order to find peace and be at rest, the vengeful spirit must overcome her hatred, and anger toward people and let her anguish go while keeping the proxy convinced to keep luring the killers to the streetlight for their gruesome demise.
Because of the spirit's overwhelming desire for revenge and finally a means to get it through a proxy, she learns to empathize for her proxy nearly getting her spirit trapped by voodoo and the proxy brutally murdered. Before the spirit can finally rest, she must make right to a now traumatized proxy.
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Have no idea if witnessing the emotional transformation of the spirit could be engaging? The revenge archetype is evident here, and "The lovely bones" comes to mind after reading your logline.
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