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A group of D-list actors are hired by the FBI to act as superheroes to scare off terrorists.
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Imagine if the Avengers were secretly just normal actors using special effects.
FBI agent Ben Baxter is dealing with a cyber terrorist organization that increasingly becomes a major problem. With some inspiration from his seven-year-old son, he devises a plan to create his own "superhero" team that will effectively convince these terrorists-and the world at large-that they are not to be messed with. It's a great plan...except his boss thinks the idea is nuts, the actors prove to be a handful, and creating a movie in real life is more difficult than he realized.
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Hi, Kevin. The concept is fun and fresh. I think the logline can be a little smoother. How about: "A group of D-list actors gets hired by the FBI to act like superheroes in order to scare off terrorists."
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That's not a bad one! I like how it is shorter
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