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CHAMPION MAN, THE SOLAR SYSTEM OUTLAW
By Michael Cole
On an alternate Earth, where doing good is considered a crime, an outlaw will risk everything to bust his friend and mentor out of prison.
SYNOPSIS:
Arin "Champion Man" Adriano is a supervillain mobster living in Yarrow Beach, New Jersey. Armed with space-themed powers, Arin is a one-man wrecking crew. Despite the advice and protests of his friend and mentor, Al Loroni, Arin refuses to get a crew, a result of his dark, mysterious past. Not even Cosimia Arcbright, the new bounty hunter on the block, HYENA, the private police force, and the Krutch twins, brothers with a family rooted in "justice", are enough to make Arin see reason. That is until Al gets arrested for saving Arin's life. Now, in order to save both his friend and the world, Arin must make some choices and compromises that will change everything.
CHAMPION MAN, THE SOLAR SYSTEM OUTLAW
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