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A immigrant indian family travels back to India, there they go through a wedding, a death and a birth.
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I like what you are attempting here but where is the conflict in the story. You've listed a series of events, however how do these events constitute a conflict that must be overcome or resolved?
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I like what you are attempting here but where is the conflict in the story. You've listed a series of events, however how do these events constitute a conflict that must be overcome or resolved?
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