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MOVING SUCKS
By Nancy Ostertag
A quirky, but loving military family struggles to assimilate after accidentally being transported 42 years through time, from 1980 to 2022.
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Is the "military" part of this crucial to the story? Or can you bring that up later in the story, but leave it out of the logline? Example: "A quirky, but loving 80s family struggles to assimilate after discovering they've accidentally been transported 42 years into the future." Just some random thoughts.
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