congrats. I do wish however that the back description was shorter. Maybe something like this "The phone range, it was Mayor Murphy. Apparently his daughter's famous Golden Biscuit was gone. Private Detective Oliver new he had to take the case - because no one turns down a request from Mayor Murphy. What Oliver didn't know was that it would challenge all his intelligence and skill, and lead down a path straight to the nefarious Rose Hill Crew."
That was considered, however I thought/felt it important to recognize the added story line, or as they say '"hook", for excitement.. Remember this is a full length -- 105 page, motion picture.. We were definitely on the same page at first.. Thanks..
congrats. I do wish however that the back description was shorter. Maybe something like this "The phone range, it was Mayor Murphy. Apparently his daughter's famous Golden Biscuit was gone. Private Detective Oliver new he had to take the case - because no one turns down a request from Mayor Murphy. What Oliver didn't know was that it would challenge all his intelligence and skill, and lead down a path straight to the nefarious Rose Hill Crew."
That was considered, however I thought/felt it important to recognize the added story line, or as they say '"hook", for excitement.. Remember this is a full length -- 105 page, motion picture.. We were definitely on the same page at first.. Thanks..