Hey Michael, this is Karen from the Stage 32 team. I just wanted to let you know I moved your post from Cinematography to Your Stage(for links and promotions), as it fits much better there. Let me know if you have any questions and all the best to you!
I’d say continue making episodes similar to what you’ve already done! The tone is perfect. Maybe raise the stakes and make him a specific type of hit man? What if he is hired to take out someone he knows? Like maybe a down on their luck, clerk or delivery person who has always been nice to him?
You have a lot of room to work with here, and the fact that you pulled this off by yourself means the sky is the limit!
I'd be very interested to see the direction you wish to take this story. Certainly has lots of options, but go with what you feel. It will not be written in stone so is changeable if you decide you don't like it. Development. Its a good thing.
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Nicely written interesting story.
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Thank you watching, Andrew!
Hey Michael, this is Karen from the Stage 32 team. I just wanted to let you know I moved your post from Cinematography to Your Stage(for links and promotions), as it fits much better there. Let me know if you have any questions and all the best to you!
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This is a really well done short! I could see this as a series, a la Dexter. Sound design is great, and the writing is top notch!
You have a really great eye for filmmaking! Congratulations!
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Michelle Dionne Wardlaw woah! Thank you so very much for checking out my short. Really appreciate you enjoying it.
I would LOVE to do a mini series set in this characters world. One day, I hope.
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I’d say continue making episodes similar to what you’ve already done! The tone is perfect. Maybe raise the stakes and make him a specific type of hit man? What if he is hired to take out someone he knows? Like maybe a down on their luck, clerk or delivery person who has always been nice to him?
You have a lot of room to work with here, and the fact that you pulled this off by yourself means the sky is the limit!
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I'd be very interested to see the direction you wish to take this story. Certainly has lots of options, but go with what you feel. It will not be written in stone so is changeable if you decide you don't like it. Development. Its a good thing.
Go for it!