Introduce Yourself : SCRIPTS that will STIR YOU by Dartanyan Adkins

SCRIPTS that will STIR YOU

Greeting from California. My name is Dartanyan Adkins. I have two complete features that are looking for a studio to bring to the big screen.

TITLE: OLD GLORY

GENRE: ACTION/ADVENTURE

HOOK: Take an epic adventure into the skies as a veteran Airforce pilot uses a decommission bomber to rescue his captured grandson

TITLE: GRAVYARDSHIFT

GENRE: HORROR

HOOK: Find out what crawls out from the dark when a guy works the GRAVEYARD SHIFT at local convenient store

If you or your agent has any interest and would like a query letter, please feel free to contact me Email: cali_giant@yahoo.com

Pete Whiting

Sounds like Iron Eagle but reversed. Ahhh Iron Eagle....the best and the worst movie at the same time. When you wanted to go to school with a walkman strapped to your leg. Anyway, good luck with your films and well done for completing them. So many make a start and never finish them.

Roy Phillips

I think you need better loglines, especially the second one.

Rutger Oosterhoff

... The second one isn't a logline. It's a tagline. But you need those too.

Dartanyan Adkins

Thanks fellows. I'm working on improving my craft

Tasha Lewis

Welcome!

Mike Taime

Like the second one Graveyard shift, sounds like something you could direct and produce with a limited budget. Best of luck to you

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