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The story revolves around six best friends driving back home drunk and sleepy late night from a casino party in another city; one of them (The protagonist) winning a jackpot of $5m from the casino over night.
He's extremely happy about his life and excited about his plans in life i.e: marrying his girlfriend whom he loves and has promised for years to marry.
When the next morning, his friends plan to fool him by pretending that he was killed in a car accident they met last night on way back home, and crying over his death and neglecting his presence.
This is all for fun.
Nobody knows what's waiting for them.
Where the one who was constantly being fooled believes them and becomes a psychopath, and suspiciously starts killing all of them one by one to re-unite.
However he finds later that it was just a joke made by his friends and he was still alive.
Good concept, but you've kinda lost me in there...too many disjoints...take a look at Christian Slater's "Very Bad Things", similar subject, good execution...might throw some ideas plus...
Thank you for your valuable suggestion. Please elaborate the disjoints.
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Sure Badar:
"his friends plan to fool him by pretending that he was killed in a car accident they met last night on way back home" - can't really tell what's going on here...they made it safe and now are pretending he died in front of his gf? How will he remain protagonist assuming he will be shaded much of the screen time...have u watched "Hangover"? The guy they left on the roof ain't protagonist...
"Where the one who was constantly being fooled believes them and becomes a psychopath, and suspiciously starts killing all of them one by one to re-unite" - where this comes from? You do not "become" psycho just on account of someone bullying you...you "are" a psycho... or you ain't...you need to hint this early on and probably make this guy sorta anti-hero of the story...
etc...if script is written, have it feedbacked before sending it off for shopping - my solid suggestion...