Your Stage : Feedback request for Pilot by Brendan Sweeny

Hello! I am wondering if anyone on this forum is interested in watching a 30 minute pilot and providing feedback? This is a mystery/thriller (in the vein of David Lynch, Coen Brothers, Hitchcock, Cormac McCarthy, etc)

Logline: In the dead of night at a remote auto repair shop, Eugene Ring, an aspiring comedian longing for the limelight, punches the clock. But when the mysterious St. Claire Benn arrives, a seemingly random interaction descends into a sinister meditation on fate, power and the nature of evil.

Trailer: https://youtu.be/wXOfX8NPpZg

Screener: https://vimeo.com/853515496

PW: screener

Google form for anonymous feedback:

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/12cdGrSYlvmyKfyetOF35c6rjT7GTxbaiISoqr4r...

I’d appreciate any/all thoughts you all may have. Thanks!