Hello everyone, just finished a 27 page short story for a small indie Horror film I plan on turning into a screenplay and filming in the near future. Attached is the link to the whole story I would like to get your feedback on it. Thanks!
LOGLINE: A young man visits the old town in the woods where he lost his younger brother years ago. Upon arrival he befriends the daughter of the head of a excavation crew and soon they uncover the dark secrets of the woods.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qOweNB2HB3VjfXBUdcT24NAQzPTGHq5r/view?u...
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In the middle of the woods, in an old town called Harwich, a young boy goes missing. Years later, the boy's brother returns determined to uncover the dark secrets of his brother's disappearance.
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A young man returns to an old town in the middle of the woods where years earlier, his brother disappeared.
I like your first one, sounds better, thanks