Your Stage : It is getting there! by Eric Lotter

My first reader came back with comments like- “hard to pinpoint the protagonist”, “ crammed with a sea of characters” “not quite able to ‘emotionally invest’.“ It was a ton of work to get to this one. I need to address my habit of exposition and trust that the characters are strong enough to show the story they are telling! The reader had some great notes on structure and format. (not included here) But for the first time I feel like I have cracked the story telling part!

I’m having steak tonight!