Screenwriting : Logline by Stevan Šerban

Stevan Šerban

Logline

When problematic space undercover cop on Earth discovers a monstrous plot to invade the Earth must confront the invaders who destroyed his planet in order to save the human race and the human woman he loves.

John

hi Stevan, like the idea: An undercover cop from a distant galaxy fights to save the human race and the woman he loves from a deadly alien invasion that will destroy Earth.

John

hi Lyse, i agree, or you could flip it and try: An undercover cop from a distant galaxy fights to save the human race and the woman he loves from a deadly alien invasion. the threat of earth being destroyed could be explored in the story. this way the logline doesn't hold any guarantee, it tells us there will be a struggle but we don't know the outcome.

Stevan Šerban

Don't you think that "problematic" describe little more closer the protagonist?

Stevan Šerban

Thanks a lot to both of you.

John

Lyse agree that's better :)

Stacey Stefano

Nice logline

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