Screenwriting : My Most Recent Comedy Sketch by Samuel James

Samuel James

My Most Recent Comedy Sketch

Keith F. Broad

Didn't grab me before 0:34 so quit.... sorry.

Samuel James

That's fine Keith, it's only my first time trying this stuff so it isn't going to be great. Any advice to fix it?

Leon Reaper

I thought it was funny :P, instead of the potato head thingy you should have done a whole sketch of them fighting over toys and tantruming and stuff. id laugh my head off

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