Screenwriting : TV Script_ VIKINGS Episode 1 by Theresa Clark

Thanks for sharing, Theresa Clark.

Theresa, first thing to do is cut up your paragraphs, they're much too big!! Try to get paragraphs with an absolute max of four lines; constucted of one sentence or several sentences. Best, Rutger

Thank you for sharing!

That's the pilot for "The Vikings" show, Rutger Oosterhoff.

Still the same comment, paragraphs too big. But here the writer gets away with it.

I loved this series, thanks for sharing Theresa!

Welcome All! I will keep them coming.

Rutger Oosterhoff Greetings Rutger.! Thanks for the advice, but I didn't write the episode. (I wish!!) As far as formatting, I make it a habit of breaking up action lines.

I wasn't paying enough attention Theresa, cheers!