Your Stage : Wrote a fiery opening scene that's "In medias res" would like feedback. by Austin Van Rensburg

Austin Van Rensburg

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2 years ago

Wrote a fiery opening scene that's "In medias res" would like feedback.

So I wrote my opener to a project i'm working on. I'm happy with it but I need honest feedback. Maybe what I did right, what I could do better and have less of. and overall thoughts.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Czqi5CT9hbVOCcOuvU9zUS8E6gm8VZ7P/view?u...

Thanks for your time.

Maurice Vaughan

2 years ago

Hey, Austin Van Rensburg. This is Maurice from the Stage 32 Lounge Crew. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Screenwriting Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge because you're asking for feedback. You can also post things that you want feedback for on Your Wall. Promotion can also go in the Your Stage Lounge and on Your Wall. Let me know if you have any questions.

Emily J

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- Maurice Vaughan
2 years ago

Hey Austin Van Rensburg! Don't forget, we also have a First 10 Page read available with executives if you're interested! https://www.stage32.com/scriptservices/coverage/buy?id=20&affid=ejlounge

Your Stage : Wrote a fiery opening scene that's "In medias res" would like feedback. by Austin Van Rensburg

Wrote a fiery opening scene that's "In medias res" would like feedback.

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