Liked it. Did not see the end coming. At all. Now I want the back story. One misspell in logline -- shouldn't "lost" be "loss"? Do you belong to any local film groups who can film your stuff? Or any other avenues like that? This is good.

Thanks. I'm really going to try and get this in someone's hands. I think it would do well in film festivals and give an actress a great role to put on her reel.

Unfortunately I have to be a woman to enter that contest, lol. But thanks anyway. I really like that police officer idea. I may expand the story and use it. Really smart. That's an academy award type story right there. Thanks.

Seriously? I looked under the rules and they said if a woman were to come up with the idea, but a man wrote it, it wouldn't be eligible. So I figured well if a man thought of an idea and a man wrote it, then there's no way in hell they would accept it. That sucks. How much was it?