Its good but I'd shorten it to give it more impact:
SHEA (V.O.)
When bad things happen, we all know the deal. Opinions vary but in the end it doesn't have to be rational, it just has to be something that grabs our attention.
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Some dialogue from one of my scripts... that's all... possibly the opening V.O. Not sure yet!
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Its good but I'd shorten it to give it more impact:
SHEA (V.O.)
When bad things happen, we all know the deal. Opinions vary but in the end it doesn't have to be rational, it just has to be something that grabs our attention.