The last time i posted asking for feedback i got some great tips and the finished product of Kluxxed is now entered in a contest, and because of the feedback I think it may have a slim chance now. Since it worked so well I figured I'd post another and again ask for feedback. Don't judge for the wrong grammars and bad speling, since I'll be going through a complete rewrite anyway. Also, I understand it's not written in very pretty words and i do plan to change that in the rewrite, but I guess if it bothers you enough then you can still let me know! Thanks all!
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Hey, Nick! Think from the reader's POV: First draft, or not, lack of style, keeps the reader from engaging in your story, or going into what we call the FICTIVE SPELL. Typos, etc., disengage the reader, my friend
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You're absolutely right! I wrote this way back before I had developed my writing skills, and have decided to rewrite, as I think it has promising characters and a good story. I thought i'd get some feedback before i did the rewrite. Maybe you're write and I should do the rewrite first and then post that and ask for feedback.
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Nickalas - You told us it has issues. If you believe in it, re-write it, then share. Good luck. D
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That's what's up, Nickalas! Way to work, my man. Whether it's a first draft, or the fifteenth, I believe our goal is to treat our readers with the utmost respect.