Hi everyone. I have been a working, paid screenwriter for 25 years and just wrote my first novel. I just finished and need some feedback from someone that doesn't know me but is well-read and hypercritical. It is a quick read, 300 pages with short paragraphs, a lot of dialogue and white on the page.
In return, I would gladly read your manuscript and respond in kind, or a screenplay or two of yours, which I am much more conversant in, and will give detailed notes as well as speak on the phone if you wish.
If you are just interested in reading and giving a critical review of a serious but fun and eventful novel, about a singer-songwriter with a severe performance anxiety disorder who gets deeply involved in what may or may not be a catfishing scheme, let me know here and how I may contact you.
I’ll swap with you.
Hi Jason. I just tried to message you but for some reason the “send” option was grey and didn’t allow it. Please email me at PeteRosenLA@gmail.com if you would like to swap and I will get back to you. Thx.
Pete - have touched base with you offline.
https://www.amazon.com/John-Dyer/e/B06XKCQ11L/ref=dp_byline_cont_book_1 If you see anything there you want to read, more than happy to exchange critiques.
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Hi John, and thank you. I think I have found a guy to do the swap but if it does not work out I will keep you in mind. I am, at first, looking for one male POV and one female POV. Although may come back for another round if I can get through my end of the bargain quick enough.
Hi Julia... yes, I would love a female reader and I will happily critique your screenplay. Please contact me here or at PeteRosenLA@gmail.com Thanks a lot!