Hey folks! My writing partner and I have just finished our package for a buddy-cop comedy tv show we have been working on, and we are looking for some feedback - would anyone like to give our (60p) pilot a read?
Logline: an Indian female cop who has battled racism and misogyny her whole life is reluctantly partnered with an arrogant, privileged white cop to investigate growing gang violence that is secretly part of a massive political-criminal conspiracy.
I've attached our Pitch-Cover (created for us by Blake Evernden) to give more of an idea. Let me know if you'd like to give'er'a go!
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I'd be happy to read it if you're still looking for feedback:)
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@Michael, very interesting hook but only just seen your post now, if your still looking for readers two cents let me know. One of the best pilots I read is Breaking Bad but there’s many ways to execute story idea, one of the main things producers want to know is “Does This Show Have Legs?”