Screenwriting : 5 minutes pitch by Louisa Klein

Louisa Klein

5 minutes pitch

Hello everyone! Can someone tell me where I can find a written 5 min pitch of a show that got actually made? I’ve found online many excellent examples of elevator pitches, but nothing that would last 5 min if said out loud. I really need examples of successful extended pitches, thanks in advance to those who’ll help me!

Louisa Klein

Thanks, I know this already. It’s not a 5 min pitch, though, it’s under 2, actually.

Tasha Lewis

Stage 32 Lounges or Blogs.

Christopher Phillips

A pitch is just a conversation. It’s the same bullet points but with the producers and execs jumping in with questions.

Jason Mirch

Hey Louisa Klein Are you looking more of a guideline as to how many pages of a written pitch translates into 5 minutes of speaking time? That is a little tougher to nail down because - unlike a script which is generally 1 page equals 1 minute - a written page of a pitch could end up being more or less.

I have seen people with 3 or 4 pages of a written pitch go well beyond 5 minutes when pitching out loud.

Louisa Klein

Well, even a guideline for length and time would help. I’m totally clueless, so I just need all the help I can get, you know?

Christopher Phillips

Make it fit for the time allotted. If you have 3 minutes, 1 minute pitch (mostly the logline) and leave room for questions. If you have 5 minutes, pitch logline and synopsis and leave time for questions. If you have 15 to 20 minutes, you'll go more into season evolution, who should act in it, etc. But the main thing is to always plan for Q&A.

Louisa Klein

Thanks! That was super helpful!

Sarah Gabrielle Baron

Laura, there is a webinar here on stage32 by Samm Hailey on pitching. It was really brilliant. Unfortunately I can't find it under Education or in the writer's Room. If you want to watch it, contact Jason Mirch. I've been at this for years and honestly, the Writer's Room here is where you see other's successful pitches and what could be better, and you get to practice. In the Vault In the Writer's Room an early pitch tank had executive Anna Henry give excellent feedback and tips. There's no magic bullet here. Like everything else, practice makes perfect and being responsive to varying situations is key. Look on my profile page for the mind map I made during Samm Hailey's workshop. I use it as a framework every time I work up a pitch. If you can't understand it feel free to message me. Keep writing!

Jill A. Hargrave

Great question, Louisa, and very helpful advice. I'm just learning how to write loglines and how to pitch. I will definitely check out the webinar Sarah suggested.

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