Screenwriting : It's not much of a success by Andy Mayo

Andy Mayo

It's not much of a success

but I've finished a second draft of my feature-length screenplay, The Garden of Eden. Would love to have comments about the logline and synopsis. Will gladly reciprocate. Thanks!

Karen "Kay" Ross

Fantastic news!

Wal Friman

Hello Andy. Your Eden logline. Great concept. Similar to mine, actually. It seems to mainly focus on describing the inciting insident.

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