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Hi Brooke, I visited your loglines and screenplays. I just randomly opened a few. First off, if you have features you'll need to somehow indicated which scripts are features as many I opened are shorts. The goal is not to make someone track down the feature. It should be as effortless as possible. Second point, is none of the scripts I opened are in proper script format. No producer or director will waste their time reading something that's not formatted properly. Your scripts, especially feature scripts, are you calling cards. It's your script-resume. So the 'best foot forward' mentality needs to be present. I encourage you to label which scripts are features, and also properly format them.
They also suffer from parentheticalitis, i.e. parenthetical leads in every line of dialogue (and not properly formatted). Cut!
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I'm saying something that could be taken as peevish.
A suggestion to spring for proper screenwriting software that doesn't watermark. Fade In Pro is $80. As mentioned, the scripts are basically unreadable.